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Spoiler Alert – Blue Really IS The Best Dog Ever!

She really IS the best dog ever!

My dog Blue is the Best Dog Ever.

Except when the Grown Son is around.

Then she ignores me completely in favor of him.

The Grown Son thinks this is hilarious.

Our last dog Wrigley used to do the same thing.

She would ignore me completely whenever my sister was around.

Last night we were all hanging out on the street watching fireworks.

Blue was with us.

She never gets upset by the fireworks.

Wrigley used to freak out.

But Blue doesn’t care.

Or didn’t care.

Last night, for the first time, she got stressed.

She tried to hide under the cars.

I sat down next to her, and she snuggled close, panting, and hiding her head.

It was time, I decided, to put her back in the house.

The Grown Son tried to take her, but she wouldn’t leave my side.

Ha – now he knows what it feels like to be ignored by the Best Dog Ever!

Blue was very happy to be back in the house and away from the chaos.

And for the rest of the evening, she ignored me in favor of the Grown Son.

But I’m not in the least bit upset by this.

I hope every dog I ever have ignores me in favor of the Grown Sons.

She keeps them coming back.

Good girl, Blue, good girl.

Liz Brenner

Everyone has a story to tell.

Even you.

Especially you.

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How To Make Your Story POP!

Shape your story

How To Make Your Story POP

Crafting Stories That Stick (and Make Your Readers Say “Wow!”)

Why do some stories capture your attention from the first sentence and stay with you long after you’ve finished reading? The secret lies in the shape of the story—its structure.

Whether you’re writing a fairy tale, a blog post, a novel, or a sales pitch, powerful storytelling follows a familiar path: setting, conflict, rising action, climax, and resolution. This story arc helps readers feel grounded, engaged, and satisfied.

To illustrate, let’s walk through these five classic elements using a timeless tale: The Three Little Pigs.

The Setting: Where The Story Begins

Every great story needs a sense of place. The setting introduces your reader to the world where the characters live and act. It can be real or imaginary—but it needs to feel vivid and specific.

In The Three Little Pigs, the setting is a quiet countryside where three pigs decide to build their own homes. The sunny, pastoral backdrop sets the stage for what feels like a safe, peaceful world. That is, until trouble arrives.

WRITING TIP: Your setting should do more than just describe a place. It should reflect tone, mood, and theme. Whether your story unfolds in a city apartment, a medieval castle, or a cozy coffee shop, the setting grounds the reader in your world.

The Conflict: What Drives The Plot

No conflict? No story. Conflict is the central problem that challenges your characters and drives the plot forward.

In our piggy tale, conflict comes in the furry, ferocious form of the Big Bad Wolf, who is determined to blow the pigs’ homes down. The pigs must find a way to survive—and outsmart—their unwelcome nemesis.

WRITING TIP: Conflict doesn’t always mean physical danger. It could be a relationship issue, an internal struggle, or a goal that feels just out of reach. Whatever it is, it should challenge your character and create stakes

The Rising Action: Building The Tension

Once conflict is introduced, the rising action kicks in. This is where the story escalates. The problems intensify, the stakes get higher, and the audience leans in.

In The Three Little Pigs, this is when the wolf blows down the straw house and then the stick house. Each house that collapses raises the tension and teaches the pigs—and the reader—a valuable lesson about preparation and perseverance.

WRITING TIP: Don’t rush this part! Rising action should stretch the tension and build curiosity. It’s the lead-up to your story’s biggest moment.

The Climax: The Turning Point

The climax is the peak of your story—the moment of greatest tension or emotional intensity.

In our example, this happens when the wolf tries to blow down the brick house…and fails. The pig who built wisely is safe, as are his brothers who found shelter in this house, and the wolf is defeated. It’s the payoff the reader has been waiting for.

WRITING TIP: Make sure your climax earns the buildup. It should directly result from your character’s choices or growth, not just a stroke of luck.

The Resolution: The Satisfying Wrap-Up

After the tension of the climax, every story needs a resolution. This is where the action winds down and the reader sees how things have changed.

In The Three Little Pigs, the pigs reflect on what they’ve learned. The wolf is defeated, the brick house stands strong, and the story ends with a clear message: hard work and smart choices pay off.

WRITING TIP: A good resolution doesn’t tie up every loose end—but it gives readers a sense of completion. Leave the audience with something to think about.

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Liz Brenner

Everyone has a story to tell.

Even you.

Especially you.

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Seriously? A New Breed of Giant Mutant Spiders?

Spiders? Eww.

Spiders?

Eww.

I’ll have to move out of my house.

I found, in our garden shed, a large pile of unidentified poop.

It’s not mice.

Mice scat is the size of uncooked grains of rice.

It’s not rats.

Rat scat is the size of cooked grains of rice.

I have no idea what the creature was, or, more importantly, how it got in the shed.

All I know is that it’s bigger than a rat.

Much, much bigger.

My whole family thinks this is hilarious.

The grown sons are each blaming each other.

Bob claims to have made a Bigfoot sighting.

They are all telling wild tales of a new breed of giant mutant spiders.

For the record, none of them are as funny as they think they are.

In fact, they’re not funny at all.

What if it IS a new breed of giant mutant spiders?

This situation calls for Cri Man Squa, F and C, double time.

If you’re an Office fan, you’ll understand.

Although now that I think about it, it could have been Packer.

Should I be worried?

What’s worse?

A new breed of giant mutant spiders?

Or a special delivery from the Packman?

Eww.

It doesn’t matter.

I’m moving out.

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Everyone has a story to tell.

Even you.

Especially you.

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