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Spoiler Alert – Blue Really IS The Best Dog Ever!

She really IS the best dog ever!

My dog Blue is the Best Dog Ever.

Except when the Grown Son is around.

Then she ignores me completely in favor of him.

The Grown Son thinks this is hilarious.

Our last dog Wrigley used to do the same thing.

She would ignore me completely whenever my sister was around.

Last night we were all hanging out on the street watching fireworks.

Blue was with us.

She never gets upset by the fireworks.

Wrigley used to freak out.

But Blue doesn’t care.

Or didn’t care.

Last night, for the first time, she got stressed.

She tried to hide under the cars.

I sat down next to her, and she snuggled close, panting, and hiding her head.

It was time, I decided, to put her back in the house.

The Grown Son tried to take her, but she wouldn’t leave my side.

Ha – now he knows what it feels like to be ignored by the Best Dog Ever!

Blue was very happy to be back in the house and away from the chaos.

And for the rest of the evening, she ignored me in favor of the Grown Son.

But I’m not in the least bit upset by this.

I hope every dog I ever have ignores me in favor of the Grown Sons.

She keeps them coming back.

Good girl, Blue, good girl.

Liz Brenner

Everyone has a story to tell.

Even you.

Especially you.

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How To Make Your Story POP!

Shape your story

How To Make Your Story POP

Crafting Stories That Stick (and Make Your Readers Say “Wow!”)

Why do some stories capture your attention from the first sentence and stay with you long after you’ve finished reading? The secret lies in the shape of the story—its structure.

Whether you’re writing a fairy tale, a blog post, a novel, or a sales pitch, powerful storytelling follows a familiar path: setting, conflict, rising action, climax, and resolution. This story arc helps readers feel grounded, engaged, and satisfied.

To illustrate, let’s walk through these five classic elements using a timeless tale: The Three Little Pigs.

The Setting: Where The Story Begins

Every great story needs a sense of place. The setting introduces your reader to the world where the characters live and act. It can be real or imaginary—but it needs to feel vivid and specific.

In The Three Little Pigs, the setting is a quiet countryside where three pigs decide to build their own homes. The sunny, pastoral backdrop sets the stage for what feels like a safe, peaceful world. That is, until trouble arrives.

WRITING TIP: Your setting should do more than just describe a place. It should reflect tone, mood, and theme. Whether your story unfolds in a city apartment, a medieval castle, or a cozy coffee shop, the setting grounds the reader in your world.

The Conflict: What Drives The Plot

No conflict? No story. Conflict is the central problem that challenges your characters and drives the plot forward.

In our piggy tale, conflict comes in the furry, ferocious form of the Big Bad Wolf, who is determined to blow the pigs’ homes down. The pigs must find a way to survive—and outsmart—their unwelcome nemesis.

WRITING TIP: Conflict doesn’t always mean physical danger. It could be a relationship issue, an internal struggle, or a goal that feels just out of reach. Whatever it is, it should challenge your character and create stakes

The Rising Action: Building The Tension

Once conflict is introduced, the rising action kicks in. This is where the story escalates. The problems intensify, the stakes get higher, and the audience leans in.

In The Three Little Pigs, this is when the wolf blows down the straw house and then the stick house. Each house that collapses raises the tension and teaches the pigs—and the reader—a valuable lesson about preparation and perseverance.

WRITING TIP: Don’t rush this part! Rising action should stretch the tension and build curiosity. It’s the lead-up to your story’s biggest moment.

The Climax: The Turning Point

The climax is the peak of your story—the moment of greatest tension or emotional intensity.

In our example, this happens when the wolf tries to blow down the brick house…and fails. The pig who built wisely is safe, as are his brothers who found shelter in this house, and the wolf is defeated. It’s the payoff the reader has been waiting for.

WRITING TIP: Make sure your climax earns the buildup. It should directly result from your character’s choices or growth, not just a stroke of luck.

The Resolution: The Satisfying Wrap-Up

After the tension of the climax, every story needs a resolution. This is where the action winds down and the reader sees how things have changed.

In The Three Little Pigs, the pigs reflect on what they’ve learned. The wolf is defeated, the brick house stands strong, and the story ends with a clear message: hard work and smart choices pay off.

WRITING TIP: A good resolution doesn’t tie up every loose end—but it gives readers a sense of completion. Leave the audience with something to think about.

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Is Texting A Skill Killer Or A Learning Tool?

Is Texting Ruining Our Writing Skills? Let’s Talk About It.

As an English teacher, I hear this a lot: “Is texting ruining students’ writing?”

Honestly? No, it’s not. But we do need to talk about the difference between texting and formal writing.

Texting is casual. It’s meant to be quick, and it’s often a little messy. You might text a friend,

“omg I’m sooo tired lol can’t even think rn 🥱”

and that’s totally fine.

That kind of writing fits the moment. It’s relaxed, it’s personal, and it’s fun.

No one cares about punctuation, sentence structure, or spelling.

But that same message doesn’t belong in a business message.

Imagine sending this text if you had to reschedule a business appointment:

not feeling it rn lol too tired, maybe 2moro?”

Yikes. That’s where things get tricky.

Here’s the good news:

We are all smart enough to code-switch. The trick is to think carefully before you hit ‘send.’ We do it all the time in real life. We speak differently to our best friend than we would to a client or an acquaintance.

Instead of blaming texting for bad writing, let’s consider it a learning opportunity.

Remember that texting is one writing style, and academic or professional writing is another.

Texting is not the enemy.

It’s just a different tool.

I noticed, recently, that in my classes, my chat box was filling up with terribly-written messages. I have started playing a daily game called, “Write or Text” where the students will send me a message in the chat box based on whichever style I have requested. They have all, from middle schoolers to adults, caught on beautifully.

Let’s simply be mindful about when to be casual and when to be professional. We can do it.

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5 Common Storytelling Mistakes – And How To Fix Them

Storytelling mistakes beginners make

Are you new to telling stories?

Are you making a lot of storytelling mistakes?

Whether you’re writing your personal story or telling it aloud, you want your audience to listen – and stay interested.

But beginners often make a few simple storytelling mistakes that can stall the story or lose the audience entirely.

Here are five of the most common storytelling mistakes – and how to fix them.

1. Cut the Backstory: Start Strong and Stay Focused

Too much background can overwhelm or bore your audience before your story even begins.

If your story involves your mother’s next-door-neighbor’s stepson’s kid’s second-grade teacher… just say “a friend.”

🔧 Fix it: Keep only the details that are essential. Trim the fat so your audience isn’t distracted from your actual story.

2. Add Dialogue to Make Your Story Come Alive

I once heard a lovely story from a woman who grew up in a large family in the middle of nowhere.

Laundry day was a big deal, and she described it in entertaining detail.

However, the story lacked dialogue, and so it felt distant.

🔧 Fix it: Dialogue adds voice, emotion, and realism. Even a few lines can help your audience feel like they’re in the story.

3. Use Conflict and Resolution to Drive the Story

Without conflict, your story is just a list of events.

If you’re telling a road trip story, a simple rundown of stops and meals isn’t compelling.

But if the car broke down in a sketchy neighborhood on a 105-degree day?

Now we’re listening.

🔧 Fix it: Show the problem. And then show how you dealt with it. That’s what gives your story shape, tension, and impact.

4. Pause for Impact: Let Your Story Breathe

Whether you’re speaking or writing, don’t rush.

A pause gives your audience time to react, reflect, or laugh.

It builds suspense, adds emotion, and emphasizes key moments.

🔧 Fix it: Use pauses before and after big moments. In writing, that can be a line break or short sentence. When speaking, just… pause.

5. End with a Bang: Create a Memorable Finish

A good story needs a strong finish.

Don’t just trail off.

Your ending should leave your audience with a laugh, a thought, or a feeling that lingers.

🔧 Fix it: Call back to your opening line, resolve the main tension, or deliver a final insight. Make the ending count.

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I Love To Interrupt, Even If AI Disapproves

I love to interrupt, even if AI disapproves

I know, I know, I know, it’s rude to interrupt.

But hear me out.

Teaching spelling can be boring.

It’s boring for the students.

It’s boring for the teacher.

But it’s necessary.

To liven up my classes, I’ll have the students write silly sentences with their words.

The only rule is that the sentences must make sense grammatically.

They can be as outrageous as they want.

As long as they keep it clean.

One kid went above and beyond the assignment.

Instead of a silly sentence, he wrote an entire silly story, incorporating all the spelling words on our list.

He wrote a very long missive about how he loves to interrupt (which was one of the spelling words.)

It was a funny story, and he had the whole class giggling.

However, when we ran the story through our classroom AI Text Proofreader, he got a long, stern lecture about manners.

It’s rude to interrupt.

Well duh.

Of course it’s rude.

That’s what made the story funny.

We tried all kinds of different prompts to let the text proofreader know that this story was satire.

It kept giving us the same response.

It was the perfect opportunity to talk to the students about the limitations of artificial intelligence.

AI doesn’t understand nuance.

Satire is nuance.

AI just doesn’t get it.

Artificial Intelligence is good, but in the end, you have to rely on your own sound judgment.

I hope they remember this very important lesson.

Liz Brenner

Everyone has a story to tell.

Even you.

Especially you.

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Yes, There Are Still Lots Of Great Kids Out There

Yes, there are still lots of great kids out there

I just binged Adolescence.

Oh. My. God.

Everyone is talking about how this generation is so messed up.

The thing is, though, we only ever hear the bad stories.

We never hear of a story going viral about some kid who took out the trash AND put a new liner in the can.

We never hear of a story going viral about a kid who found a dog, checked the tags, and made sure that it got home safely.

We never hear of a story going viral about kid who followed instructions and turned their homework in on time.

There are plenty of great kids out there.

I have a middle-school student who told me that he wrote a book.

It wasn’t an assignment, he just wanted to do it.

He very excitedly told me all about the plot, and he promised that he would upload it for me to read.

I can’t wait!

Another student, only ten years old, knew what a hyperbole was.

And if that wasn’t enough, a few days later, we were discussing idioms such as “the apple of my eye,” and “it’s raining cats and dogs,” and he said, “That’s like a hyperbole, right?”

Yes, you brilliant child, yes, it is.

Another time, we were discussing apostrophes, and I told the kids that it drives me absolutely crazy to see apostrophes in plurals.

You see it all the time, especially in restaurants with handwritten signs.

One girl asked timidly, “So what do we do when we see it?”

“Nothing!” I assured her, “it’s rude to randomly correct people.”

She giggled in relief.

I think that she was afraid that she would have to correct the sign.

Nope.

She can just be proud that she knows how to use an apostrophe correctly.

Mr. Rogers said that during times of crisis, look for the helpers.

To paraphrase Mr. Rogers, after you watch Adolescence, look for the great kids.

They’re out there.

Liz Brenner

Everyone has a story to tell.

Even you.

Especially you.

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Why It’s OK To Shenanigate Every Now And Then

Why It's OK To Shenanigate Every Now And Then

It was Saint Patrick’s Day – a perfect day to shenanigate!

Is shenanigate a word?

Yes!

Well, maybe not in the dictionary.

But it’s obvious what it means.

Grammar may be the bones of any language.

But wordplay is the personality.

If we all spoke in perfect, formal English all the time, the world would be a dreary place.

Boring, and pompous, and tiresome.

Once, while teaching an online class, I told the group to hold on a second because my mouse wasn’t mousing.

Everyone burst out laughing.

They were surprised to hear an English teacher, a writer, and an editor speak like that.

But they understood me, didn’t they?

Even though “mousing” isn’t a word, in that context, it was perfectly logical.

The golden rule of playing with words is that you still have to make sense.

It’s OK to shenanigate on Saint Patrick’s Day.

You know what it means.

Liz Brenner

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Why You Need To Write Conflict Into Your Stories

Why you need to write conflict into your stories

A good story requires conflict.

Conflict is what drives the narrative forward.

Without conflict, all you’ve got is a list of things that happened.

And that’s not compelling.

Let’s take, for example, a story about a trip to your local coffee shop.

If you say that you met a friend, ordered your drinks, chatted with each other, and then left, that’s not a story.

It’s a list of things that happened.

Can you imagine how your story might be improved if you threw in some conflict?

What if you found yourself sitting next to your overbearing boss?

Awkward!

What if your friend gave you some devastating news?

Oof!

What if, at the table next to you, there were some teenagers dressed in chicken suits?

What?

Now you’ve got a good story.

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I Don’t Think I Remember How To Use An Encyclopedia!

Encyclopedia

The word ‘encyclopedia’ was a spelling word for my middle schoolers the other day.

I asked if anybody knew what it meant.

After all, who uses an encyclopedia anymore?

Today we’ve got Google.

One kid knew what it was.

He has a set in his house.

Just that morning he used it to research information for his history class.

I was shocked that a 21st-century kid would know about encyclopedias.

He assured me that he only used it because his mom made him.

His preference would have been the internet.

It just goes to show that the more things change, the more they stay the same.

Kids today still know how to use an encyclopedia.

And moms are still making kids do the right thing.

Liz Brenner

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Being Coachable Is The Secret To Success

On being coachable

My boys once had a coach who swore he could teach any kid to play.

And he did.

Kids would start out timid and shy and uncoordinated.

And he would turn them into athletes.

It was an amazing transformation.

The caveat, he said, was that the kid had to be coachable.

The ones who argued or who complained or who dragged their feet might not turn into athletes, even if they had raw talent.

Anyone who was willing to listen, willing to try, and willing to accept advice could be turned into a fine athlete.

I always admired that coach.

I teach my English classes the same way.

Every child has the capacity to learn to read and write.

I have had middle school students reading at a third-grade level, and I’ve brought them up to grade level.

I have had ten-year-olds who couldn’t read at all, and I’ve brought them up to grade level.

I have had troubled kids who thought there was no hope, and I’ve brought them up to grade level.

The caveat is that they have to be coachable.

They have to be willing to listen, willing to try, and willing to accept advice.

I had one middle-school girl who was not coachable.

The class was online, and she was always on her phone during every session.

How do I know?

Her eyes were glued down to her lap, and she would laugh at inappropriate moments.

I called on her often, in an attempt to force her to pay attention.

Her responses were either an eye roll or a completely off-topic answer.

I encouraged her to set her phone aside.

I sent messages to her parents.

Nothing ever changed.

Sigh.

She got out of this class exactly what she put into it.

Nothing.

This kid didn’t make any progress.

Hopefully it was just a phase for her.

One day she’ll realize that she has some catching up to do.

I’ve taught plenty of adults how to read.

She can come back to me when she has her epiphany.

When she’s ready to be coachable, I’ll teach her to read.

Liz Brenner

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Even you.

Especially you.

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