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A Handsome Man Wants To Be My New BFF!

A Handsome Man Wants To Be My New BFF!

The Very Handsome Man is back.

Actually, he never left.

He keeps showing up with a different pic and same script, hoping I won’t notice the reruns.

Today, I got yet another friend request.

As expected, the profile features a Very Handsome Man with Very Luxurious Toys.

Yachts. Sports cars. Sometimes even a tiger or two.

Always staged in a dreamy beach setting.

And – SURPRISE – he loves my smile.

And my posts.

And he wants to be my friend.

Yay!

A new BFF!

But hold on.

According to his profile, this one is a Proudly Orthopedic Surgeon Doctor.

Seriously?

Here’s the thing:

If you’re going to try scam someone, maybe don’t scam an English teacher.

Or at least make the effort to run your fake profile through a grammar checker.

Thanks, but no thanks, Very Handsome Man.

I’ll pass.

Again.

Liz Brenner

Everyone has a story to tell.

Even you.

Especially you.

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How Less Can Be More In Great Storytelling

How Less Can Be More In Storytelling

The Power of Minimalism:

A Storytelling Lesson from a Duck

DISCLAIMER: I did not draw this comic. The creator is unknown.

At first glance, this comic looks like a goofy lineup of animals making wishes.

The dog wants to fly.

The fish wants to walk.

The bird wants to swim.

And the duck?

The duck says nothing.

Then comes the second panel.

Every animal turns to glare furiously at the duck.

And that’s where the real magic happens.

This comic is hilarious, not because of what’s said, but because of what isn’t said.

And that’s exactly why it works – especially as a lesson in writing.

Storytelling Isn’t Just About Words

As writers, we often feel the need to spell everything out.

To make sure the reader gets it.

We clarify.

We summarize.

We overexplain.

But some of the most powerful moments in storytelling happen when we don’t say a thing.

When we let the silence, the implication, or the image do the work.

This comic is a perfect example.

How this Comic Delivers Without Saying a Word

Let’s break down the structure:

  • The dog, fish, and bird each express a desire for an ability they don’t possess.
  • The duck says nothing.
  • In the second panel, no one speaks. The animals just glare furiously at the duck.

That moment of stillness is the punchline.

It lands harder because it isn’t explained.

The readers are trusted to connect the dots.

Implication Is a Powerful Tool

As writers, we can learn from this.

The audience is smarter than we sometimes give them credit for.

They enjoy filling in the blanks.

When we hand them everything, we rob them of that “aha” moment that makes a story so satisfying.

Leaving space for implication can:

  • Create tension.
  • Build trust in the reader.
  • Sharpen the humor.
  • Deepen the emotional impact.

The Takeaway for Storytelling

When you’re writing a dialogue, a narration, or even a punchline, ask yourself: Does this need to be said?

Or will it hit harder if I leave it out?

Sometimes the unsaid speaks louder than the said.

Exactly like the look on that duck’s face.

Liz Brenner

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Even you.

Especially you.

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This Is So Much Better Than Doomscrolling!

This is so much better than doomscrolling!

While doomscrolling the other day, I caught something unexpected.

I saw a livestream of an elephant rescue.

After 44 years of solitary living in a cement enclosure, this elephant was finally free.

She arrived at a sanctuary and stepped onto soft dirt for the first time.

There was hay and water and shade.

She was playing.

Frolicking.

You could almost see her joy.

This must be the best day of her life.

For now, she’s staying in the barnyard as she adjusts to her new home.

Soon she’ll be able to join the other elephants roaming freely around the grounds.

As I watched this elephant explore her new home, it reminded me of the first day we brought Blue home.

She didn’t quite know what to think of the backyard.

She’d only ever lived in a cage.

Freedom was unfamiliar.

But now?

Now Blue owns the place.

She’s living her best life chasing rabbits, barking at delivery trucks, and stealing the occasional sock.

Instead of doomscrolling, I watched freedom and joy unfold in real time.

I will be following this elephant.

She reminded me to stop the doomscrolling and look for hope.

It’s there.

Liz Brenner

Everyone has a story to tell.

Even you.

Especially you.

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Spoiler Alert – Blue Really IS The Best Dog Ever!

She really IS the best dog ever!

My dog Blue is the Best Dog Ever.

Except when the Grown Son is around.

Then she ignores me completely in favor of him.

The Grown Son thinks this is hilarious.

Our last dog Wrigley used to do the same thing.

She would ignore me completely whenever my sister was around.

Last night we were all hanging out on the street watching fireworks.

Blue was with us.

She never gets upset by the fireworks.

Wrigley used to freak out.

But Blue doesn’t care.

Or didn’t care.

Last night, for the first time, she got stressed.

She tried to hide under the cars.

I sat down next to her, and she snuggled close, panting, and hiding her head.

It was time, I decided, to put her back in the house.

The Grown Son tried to take her, but she wouldn’t leave my side.

Ha – now he knows what it feels like to be ignored by the Best Dog Ever!

Blue was very happy to be back in the house and away from the chaos.

And for the rest of the evening, she ignored me in favor of the Grown Son.

But I’m not in the least bit upset by this.

I hope every dog I ever have ignores me in favor of the Grown Sons.

She keeps them coming back.

Good girl, Blue, good girl.

Liz Brenner

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Especially you.

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How To Make Your Story POP!

Shape your story

How To Make Your Story POP

Crafting Stories That Stick (and Make Your Readers Say “Wow!”)

Why do some stories capture your attention from the first sentence and stay with you long after you’ve finished reading? The secret lies in the shape of the story—its structure.

Whether you’re writing a fairy tale, a blog post, a novel, or a sales pitch, powerful storytelling follows a familiar path: setting, conflict, rising action, climax, and resolution. This story arc helps readers feel grounded, engaged, and satisfied.

To illustrate, let’s walk through these five classic elements using a timeless tale: The Three Little Pigs.

The Setting: Where The Story Begins

Every great story needs a sense of place. The setting introduces your reader to the world where the characters live and act. It can be real or imaginary—but it needs to feel vivid and specific.

In The Three Little Pigs, the setting is a quiet countryside where three pigs decide to build their own homes. The sunny, pastoral backdrop sets the stage for what feels like a safe, peaceful world. That is, until trouble arrives.

WRITING TIP: Your setting should do more than just describe a place. It should reflect tone, mood, and theme. Whether your story unfolds in a city apartment, a medieval castle, or a cozy coffee shop, the setting grounds the reader in your world.

The Conflict: What Drives The Plot

No conflict? No story. Conflict is the central problem that challenges your characters and drives the plot forward.

In our piggy tale, conflict comes in the furry, ferocious form of the Big Bad Wolf, who is determined to blow the pigs’ homes down. The pigs must find a way to survive—and outsmart—their unwelcome nemesis.

WRITING TIP: Conflict doesn’t always mean physical danger. It could be a relationship issue, an internal struggle, or a goal that feels just out of reach. Whatever it is, it should challenge your character and create stakes

The Rising Action: Building The Tension

Once conflict is introduced, the rising action kicks in. This is where the story escalates. The problems intensify, the stakes get higher, and the audience leans in.

In The Three Little Pigs, this is when the wolf blows down the straw house and then the stick house. Each house that collapses raises the tension and teaches the pigs—and the reader—a valuable lesson about preparation and perseverance.

WRITING TIP: Don’t rush this part! Rising action should stretch the tension and build curiosity. It’s the lead-up to your story’s biggest moment.

The Climax: The Turning Point

The climax is the peak of your story—the moment of greatest tension or emotional intensity.

In our example, this happens when the wolf tries to blow down the brick house…and fails. The pig who built wisely is safe, as are his brothers who found shelter in this house, and the wolf is defeated. It’s the payoff the reader has been waiting for.

WRITING TIP: Make sure your climax earns the buildup. It should directly result from your character’s choices or growth, not just a stroke of luck.

The Resolution: The Satisfying Wrap-Up

After the tension of the climax, every story needs a resolution. This is where the action winds down and the reader sees how things have changed.

In The Three Little Pigs, the pigs reflect on what they’ve learned. The wolf is defeated, the brick house stands strong, and the story ends with a clear message: hard work and smart choices pay off.

WRITING TIP: A good resolution doesn’t tie up every loose end—but it gives readers a sense of completion. Leave the audience with something to think about.

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The Planets All Lined Up – Did You See It?

Everyone happened to be home for dinner the night the planets all lined up.

I made the whole family march outside and take a look.

Everyone rolled their eyes, but they all followed me out.

It was amazing!

A discussion about Uranus ensued.

Of course it did.

I have boys.

A Mother of Boys comes to expect this.

The Uranus jokes kept us all outside just a little bit longer, taking in this fantastic, once-in-a-lifetime phenomenon.

With boys, it’s a trade off.

I have to listen to some off-colored remarks.

And they (usually) do what I ask of them.

It works for me.

Liz Brenner

Everyone has a story to tell.

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Especially you.

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I Don’t Think I Remember How To Use An Encyclopedia!

Encyclopedia

The word ‘encyclopedia’ was a spelling word for my middle schoolers the other day.

I asked if anybody knew what it meant.

After all, who uses an encyclopedia anymore?

Today we’ve got Google.

One kid knew what it was.

He has a set in his house.

Just that morning he used it to research information for his history class.

I was shocked that a 21st-century kid would know about encyclopedias.

He assured me that he only used it because his mom made him.

His preference would have been the internet.

It just goes to show that the more things change, the more they stay the same.

Kids today still know how to use an encyclopedia.

And moms are still making kids do the right thing.

Liz Brenner

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Even you.

Especially you.

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This One Scary Procedure Will Stop That Vicious Cycle

A Vicious Cycle

It’s been a vicious cycle.

I’ve had this bit of scar tissue on the inside of my cheek.

It sticks out, so I keep biting it.

Because I keep biting it, it keeps growing bigger.

And the bigger it gets, the more often I bite it.

Finally, the dentist advised removing it.

I HATE dental procedures.

But I hate this bitey-bit even more.

So I agreed to have it removed.

I thought they would just take a knife and shave it off.

That’s what a dermatologist would do.

Apparently, the dentist operates in a completely different orbit than the dermatologist.

They did not cut it.

They cauterized it.

In other words, they burned it off.

They used tweezers to hold the lesion up, and then they cauterized the base.

Yes, there was smoke.

Yes, there was the smell of burning flesh.

Yes, I was completely numb.

I sat very, very, very still so they wouldn’t accidentally burn parts of me that they didn’t intend to burn

But I was freaking out on the inside.

When I got home and took a look, I was horrified to see a blackened, ashy fire pit inside my cheek.

Seriously, it was a third-degree burn.

It brought to mind every crime movie I’ve ever seen where they put out a cigarette on somebody’s face.

You can’t use a salve or an ointment inside your mouth.

You just have to deal with it.

Ewww, it was gross.

Nobody was more surprised than me to find, the next morning, that it was significantly healed.

It was no longer black and ashy.

It didn’t even hurt.

It’s reassuring to know that the dentist really did know what she was doing.

I’ll still freak out at my next visit.

Because that’s how I roll.

But I’ll definitely freak out with a little more confidence, a little less crime-movie vibe, and a whole lot less of that painful vicious cycle.

Liz Brenner

Everyone has a story to tell.

Even you.

Especially you.

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Being Coachable Is The Secret To Success

On being coachable

My boys once had a coach who swore he could teach any kid to play.

And he did.

Kids would start out timid and shy and uncoordinated.

And he would turn them into athletes.

It was an amazing transformation.

The caveat, he said, was that the kid had to be coachable.

The ones who argued or who complained or who dragged their feet might not turn into athletes, even if they had raw talent.

Anyone who was willing to listen, willing to try, and willing to accept advice could be turned into a fine athlete.

I always admired that coach.

I teach my English classes the same way.

Every child has the capacity to learn to read and write.

I have had middle school students reading at a third-grade level, and I’ve brought them up to grade level.

I have had ten-year-olds who couldn’t read at all, and I’ve brought them up to grade level.

I have had troubled kids who thought there was no hope, and I’ve brought them up to grade level.

The caveat is that they have to be coachable.

They have to be willing to listen, willing to try, and willing to accept advice.

I had one middle-school girl who was not coachable.

The class was online, and she was always on her phone during every session.

How do I know?

Her eyes were glued down to her lap, and she would laugh at inappropriate moments.

I called on her often, in an attempt to force her to pay attention.

Her responses were either an eye roll or a completely off-topic answer.

I encouraged her to set her phone aside.

I sent messages to her parents.

Nothing ever changed.

Sigh.

She got out of this class exactly what she put into it.

Nothing.

This kid didn’t make any progress.

Hopefully it was just a phase for her.

One day she’ll realize that she has some catching up to do.

I’ve taught plenty of adults how to read.

She can come back to me when she has her epiphany.

When she’s ready to be coachable, I’ll teach her to read.

Liz Brenner

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Even you.

Especially you.

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How To Turn Down The Hot Date Of A Lifetime

A hot date?

I got an urgent notice regarding my toll tags.

Apparently, I’m overdrawn on my account.

And I owe late fees.

They’re going to send me to collections.

Unless I follow their instructions.

And do it immediately.

But here’s the thing.

Their email address had the word “romance” in it.

Seriously?

The Texas Department of Transportaion issues the toll tags.

I don’t think of romance when I think of TxDOT.

I know, Valentine’s Day is coming up.

But that still doesn’t equate TxDOT with a hot date.

Yeah, nah, I’m not going to follow those instructions.

It doesn’t sound romantic at all.

In fact, it sounds like the exact opposite of a hot date

Since there’s no possibility of chocolate or flowers, and it’s a sure bet that there will be no sizzling hot date, I’m just going to ignore the whole thing.

Sorry, Scammer, I won’t be your Valentine.

Liz Brenner

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