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Spoiler Alert – Blue Really IS The Best Dog Ever!

She really IS the best dog ever!

My dog Blue is the Best Dog Ever.

Except when the Grown Son is around.

Then she ignores me completely in favor of him.

The Grown Son thinks this is hilarious.

Our last dog Wrigley used to do the same thing.

She would ignore me completely whenever my sister was around.

Last night we were all hanging out on the street watching fireworks.

Blue was with us.

She never gets upset by the fireworks.

Wrigley used to freak out.

But Blue doesn’t care.

Or didn’t care.

Last night, for the first time, she got stressed.

She tried to hide under the cars.

I sat down next to her, and she snuggled close, panting, and hiding her head.

It was time, I decided, to put her back in the house.

The Grown Son tried to take her, but she wouldn’t leave my side.

Ha – now he knows what it feels like to be ignored by the Best Dog Ever!

Blue was very happy to be back in the house and away from the chaos.

And for the rest of the evening, she ignored me in favor of the Grown Son.

But I’m not in the least bit upset by this.

I hope every dog I ever have ignores me in favor of the Grown Sons.

She keeps them coming back.

Good girl, Blue, good girl.

Liz Brenner

Everyone has a story to tell.

Even you.

Especially you.

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How To Make Your Story POP!

Shape your story

How To Make Your Story POP

Crafting Stories That Stick (and Make Your Readers Say “Wow!”)

Why do some stories capture your attention from the first sentence and stay with you long after you’ve finished reading? The secret lies in the shape of the story—its structure.

Whether you’re writing a fairy tale, a blog post, a novel, or a sales pitch, powerful storytelling follows a familiar path: setting, conflict, rising action, climax, and resolution. This story arc helps readers feel grounded, engaged, and satisfied.

To illustrate, let’s walk through these five classic elements using a timeless tale: The Three Little Pigs.

The Setting: Where The Story Begins

Every great story needs a sense of place. The setting introduces your reader to the world where the characters live and act. It can be real or imaginary—but it needs to feel vivid and specific.

In The Three Little Pigs, the setting is a quiet countryside where three pigs decide to build their own homes. The sunny, pastoral backdrop sets the stage for what feels like a safe, peaceful world. That is, until trouble arrives.

WRITING TIP: Your setting should do more than just describe a place. It should reflect tone, mood, and theme. Whether your story unfolds in a city apartment, a medieval castle, or a cozy coffee shop, the setting grounds the reader in your world.

The Conflict: What Drives The Plot

No conflict? No story. Conflict is the central problem that challenges your characters and drives the plot forward.

In our piggy tale, conflict comes in the furry, ferocious form of the Big Bad Wolf, who is determined to blow the pigs’ homes down. The pigs must find a way to survive—and outsmart—their unwelcome nemesis.

WRITING TIP: Conflict doesn’t always mean physical danger. It could be a relationship issue, an internal struggle, or a goal that feels just out of reach. Whatever it is, it should challenge your character and create stakes

The Rising Action: Building The Tension

Once conflict is introduced, the rising action kicks in. This is where the story escalates. The problems intensify, the stakes get higher, and the audience leans in.

In The Three Little Pigs, this is when the wolf blows down the straw house and then the stick house. Each house that collapses raises the tension and teaches the pigs—and the reader—a valuable lesson about preparation and perseverance.

WRITING TIP: Don’t rush this part! Rising action should stretch the tension and build curiosity. It’s the lead-up to your story’s biggest moment.

The Climax: The Turning Point

The climax is the peak of your story—the moment of greatest tension or emotional intensity.

In our example, this happens when the wolf tries to blow down the brick house…and fails. The pig who built wisely is safe, as are his brothers who found shelter in this house, and the wolf is defeated. It’s the payoff the reader has been waiting for.

WRITING TIP: Make sure your climax earns the buildup. It should directly result from your character’s choices or growth, not just a stroke of luck.

The Resolution: The Satisfying Wrap-Up

After the tension of the climax, every story needs a resolution. This is where the action winds down and the reader sees how things have changed.

In The Three Little Pigs, the pigs reflect on what they’ve learned. The wolf is defeated, the brick house stands strong, and the story ends with a clear message: hard work and smart choices pay off.

WRITING TIP: A good resolution doesn’t tie up every loose end—but it gives readers a sense of completion. Leave the audience with something to think about.

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Liz Brenner

Everyone has a story to tell.

Even you.

Especially you.

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The Planets All Lined Up – Did You See It?

Everyone happened to be home for dinner the night the planets all lined up.

I made the whole family march outside and take a look.

Everyone rolled their eyes, but they all followed me out.

It was amazing!

A discussion about Uranus ensued.

Of course it did.

I have boys.

A Mother of Boys comes to expect this.

The Uranus jokes kept us all outside just a little bit longer, taking in this fantastic, once-in-a-lifetime phenomenon.

With boys, it’s a trade off.

I have to listen to some off-colored remarks.

And they (usually) do what I ask of them.

It works for me.

Liz Brenner

Everyone has a story to tell.

Even you.

Especially you.

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I Don’t Think I Remember How To Use An Encyclopedia!

Encyclopedia

The word ‘encyclopedia’ was a spelling word for my middle schoolers the other day.

I asked if anybody knew what it meant.

After all, who uses an encyclopedia anymore?

Today we’ve got Google.

One kid knew what it was.

He has a set in his house.

Just that morning he used it to research information for his history class.

I was shocked that a 21st-century kid would know about encyclopedias.

He assured me that he only used it because his mom made him.

His preference would have been the internet.

It just goes to show that the more things change, the more they stay the same.

Kids today still know how to use an encyclopedia.

And moms are still making kids do the right thing.

Liz Brenner

Everyone has a story to tell.

Even you.

Especially you.

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This One Scary Procedure Will Stop That Vicious Cycle

A Vicious Cycle

It’s been a vicious cycle.

I’ve had this bit of scar tissue on the inside of my cheek.

It sticks out, so I keep biting it.

Because I keep biting it, it keeps growing bigger.

And the bigger it gets, the more often I bite it.

Finally, the dentist advised removing it.

I HATE dental procedures.

But I hate this bitey-bit even more.

So I agreed to have it removed.

I thought they would just take a knife and shave it off.

That’s what a dermatologist would do.

Apparently, the dentist operates in a completely different orbit than the dermatologist.

They did not cut it.

They cauterized it.

In other words, they burned it off.

They used tweezers to hold the lesion up, and then they cauterized the base.

Yes, there was smoke.

Yes, there was the smell of burning flesh.

Yes, I was completely numb.

I sat very, very, very still so they wouldn’t accidentally burn parts of me that they didn’t intend to burn

But I was freaking out on the inside.

When I got home and took a look, I was horrified to see a blackened, ashy fire pit inside my cheek.

Seriously, it was a third-degree burn.

It brought to mind every crime movie I’ve ever seen where they put out a cigarette on somebody’s face.

You can’t use a salve or an ointment inside your mouth.

You just have to deal with it.

Ewww, it was gross.

Nobody was more surprised than me to find, the next morning, that it was significantly healed.

It was no longer black and ashy.

It didn’t even hurt.

It’s reassuring to know that the dentist really did know what she was doing.

I’ll still freak out at my next visit.

Because that’s how I roll.

But I’ll definitely freak out with a little more confidence, a little less crime-movie vibe, and a whole lot less of that painful vicious cycle.

Liz Brenner

Everyone has a story to tell.

Even you.

Especially you.

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Being Coachable Is The Secret To Success

On being coachable

My boys once had a coach who swore he could teach any kid to play.

And he did.

Kids would start out timid and shy and uncoordinated.

And he would turn them into athletes.

It was an amazing transformation.

The caveat, he said, was that the kid had to be coachable.

The ones who argued or who complained or who dragged their feet might not turn into athletes, even if they had raw talent.

Anyone who was willing to listen, willing to try, and willing to accept advice could be turned into a fine athlete.

I always admired that coach.

I teach my English classes the same way.

Every child has the capacity to learn to read and write.

I have had middle school students reading at a third-grade level, and I’ve brought them up to grade level.

I have had ten-year-olds who couldn’t read at all, and I’ve brought them up to grade level.

I have had troubled kids who thought there was no hope, and I’ve brought them up to grade level.

The caveat is that they have to be coachable.

They have to be willing to listen, willing to try, and willing to accept advice.

I had one middle-school girl who was not coachable.

The class was online, and she was always on her phone during every session.

How do I know?

Her eyes were glued down to her lap, and she would laugh at inappropriate moments.

I called on her often, in an attempt to force her to pay attention.

Her responses were either an eye roll or a completely off-topic answer.

I encouraged her to set her phone aside.

I sent messages to her parents.

Nothing ever changed.

Sigh.

She got out of this class exactly what she put into it.

Nothing.

This kid didn’t make any progress.

Hopefully it was just a phase for her.

One day she’ll realize that she has some catching up to do.

I’ve taught plenty of adults how to read.

She can come back to me when she has her epiphany.

When she’s ready to be coachable, I’ll teach her to read.

Liz Brenner

Everyone has a story to tell.

Even you.

Especially you.

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How To Turn Down The Hot Date Of A Lifetime

A hot date?

I got an urgent notice regarding my toll tags.

Apparently, I’m overdrawn on my account.

And I owe late fees.

They’re going to send me to collections.

Unless I follow their instructions.

And do it immediately.

But here’s the thing.

Their email address had the word “romance” in it.

Seriously?

The Texas Department of Transportaion issues the toll tags.

I don’t think of romance when I think of TxDOT.

I know, Valentine’s Day is coming up.

But that still doesn’t equate TxDOT with a hot date.

Yeah, nah, I’m not going to follow those instructions.

It doesn’t sound romantic at all.

In fact, it sounds like the exact opposite of a hot date

Since there’s no possibility of chocolate or flowers, and it’s a sure bet that there will be no sizzling hot date, I’m just going to ignore the whole thing.

Sorry, Scammer, I won’t be your Valentine.

Liz Brenner

Everyone has a story to tell.

Even you.

Especially you.

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Why Spelling Is Important – Put the Pedal to the Metal

Put the pedal to the metal

I’m an English teacher.

And an editor.

I should know better.

But I’m only human.

To this day, I can’t figure out the difference between affect and effect.

I know, I could use the RAVEN trick.

Remember that Affect is a Verb and Effect is a Noun.

Except, of course, that sometimes affect is a noun and sometimes effect is a verb.

Ugh.

I just can’t.

My workaround is to simply find another way to say it.

I’ll go to huge lengths to avoid using these words.

There’s always another word.

And so it is with the idiom “put the pedal to the metal.”

Is it pedal or petal or peddle?

Is it medal or metal or meddle?

The correct idiom – put the pedal to the metal – is a car reference, indicating that you should push the gas pedal all the way down to the floorboard in order to go as fast as you can.

If you can’t figure out how to write it correctly, find another idiom.

There’s always another idiom.

Try using “B*lls to the wall.”

It’s an aviation reference, and it means the same thing.

Go as fast as you can.

Liz Brenner

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Even you.

Especially you.

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It Snowed, And Now We’re In A Winter Wonderland

It Snowed, and Now We're In A Winter Wonderland

It snowed, it snowed, it snowed!

Everyone is always so surprised when it snows here in North Texas.

But why should they be surprised?

It snows every year.

This was a gentle snowstorm with several inches of lovely white powder.

It’s a beautiful, powdery, winter wonderland.

Blue is in doggy heaven.

She has had the perpetual zoomies, running and jumping and romping in the snow.

With her curly hair, the snow clumps all over her body, and it won’t rub off with a towel.

I have to hair-dry her to melt the ice clumps off.

She does not appreciate the hair dryer.

But she does appreciate the iciclectomies.

I have enjoyed wearing boots and mittens and sweaters for the past couple of days.

But now the storm is over.

The weather will warm up over the weekend, and the snow will quickly melt away.

I’m fine with that.

I’ve had my fill of winter.

This Southern California girl can only take so much of the winter wonderland thing.

I’m ready for spring.

Liz Brenner

Everyone has a story to tell.

Even you.

Especially you.

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How To Have Some Fun While You’re Learning Something

How to have some fun while you're learning something

Did you have some fun?

Did you learn anything?

We ask these two questions at the end of every Toastmasters meeting.

We recently had our Toastmasters holiday party.

It was not an official meeting.

It was dinner, a gift exchange, and games.

Yes, I had some fun.

Yes, I learned a thing or two.

In fact, I may have learned a thing or two more than I wanted to know.

I laughed so hard I cried.

Literally.

I was crying.

I think I felt God in that Chilis.

That’s an Office reference, if you’re not an Office fan.

IYKYK.

Sarah knew.

I’m so glad I had a pinch hitter.

Thank you, Scotty, for hitting for me.

I would have had to forfeit without you.

Who knew that Patty had such hidden talents?

Who knew that Melanie had such hidden talents?

Who could have guessed what James had just recently done?

Yes, I learned something.

Yes, I had some fun.

We’ll definitely have to do that again.

Liz Brenner

Everyone has a story to tell.

Even you.

Especially you.

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