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How Less Can Be More In Great Storytelling

How Less Can Be More In Storytelling

The Power of Minimalism:

A Storytelling Lesson from a Duck

DISCLAIMER: I did not draw this comic. The creator is unknown.

At first glance, this comic looks like a goofy lineup of animals making wishes.

The dog wants to fly.

The fish wants to walk.

The bird wants to swim.

And the duck?

The duck says nothing.

Then comes the second panel.

Every animal turns to glare furiously at the duck.

And that’s where the real magic happens.

This comic is hilarious, not because of what’s said, but because of what isn’t said.

And that’s exactly why it works – especially as a lesson in writing.

Storytelling Isn’t Just About Words

As writers, we often feel the need to spell everything out.

To make sure the reader gets it.

We clarify.

We summarize.

We overexplain.

But some of the most powerful moments in storytelling happen when we don’t say a thing.

When we let the silence, the implication, or the image do the work.

This comic is a perfect example.

How this Comic Delivers Without Saying a Word

Let’s break down the structure:

  • The dog, fish, and bird each express a desire for an ability they don’t possess.
  • The duck says nothing.
  • In the second panel, no one speaks. The animals just glare furiously at the duck.

That moment of stillness is the punchline.

It lands harder because it isn’t explained.

The readers are trusted to connect the dots.

Implication Is a Powerful Tool

As writers, we can learn from this.

The audience is smarter than we sometimes give them credit for.

They enjoy filling in the blanks.

When we hand them everything, we rob them of that “aha” moment that makes a story so satisfying.

Leaving space for implication can:

  • Create tension.
  • Build trust in the reader.
  • Sharpen the humor.
  • Deepen the emotional impact.

The Takeaway for Storytelling

When you’re writing a dialogue, a narration, or even a punchline, ask yourself: Does this need to be said?

Or will it hit harder if I leave it out?

Sometimes the unsaid speaks louder than the said.

Exactly like the look on that duck’s face.

Liz Brenner

Everyone has a story to tell.

Even you.

Especially you.

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This Is So Much Better Than Doomscrolling!

This is so much better than doomscrolling!

While doomscrolling the other day, I caught something unexpected.

I saw a livestream of an elephant rescue.

After 44 years of solitary living in a cement enclosure, this elephant was finally free.

She arrived at a sanctuary and stepped onto soft dirt for the first time.

There was hay and water and shade.

She was playing.

Frolicking.

You could almost see her joy.

This must be the best day of her life.

For now, she’s staying in the barnyard as she adjusts to her new home.

Soon she’ll be able to join the other elephants roaming freely around the grounds.

As I watched this elephant explore her new home, it reminded me of the first day we brought Blue home.

She didn’t quite know what to think of the backyard.

She’d only ever lived in a cage.

Freedom was unfamiliar.

But now?

Now Blue owns the place.

She’s living her best life chasing rabbits, barking at delivery trucks, and stealing the occasional sock.

Instead of doomscrolling, I watched freedom and joy unfold in real time.

I will be following this elephant.

She reminded me to stop the doomscrolling and look for hope.

It’s there.

Liz Brenner

Everyone has a story to tell.

Even you.

Especially you.

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Spoiler Alert – Blue Really IS The Best Dog Ever!

She really IS the best dog ever!

My dog Blue is the Best Dog Ever.

Except when the Grown Son is around.

Then she ignores me completely in favor of him.

The Grown Son thinks this is hilarious.

Our last dog Wrigley used to do the same thing.

She would ignore me completely whenever my sister was around.

Last night we were all hanging out on the street watching fireworks.

Blue was with us.

She never gets upset by the fireworks.

Wrigley used to freak out.

But Blue doesn’t care.

Or didn’t care.

Last night, for the first time, she got stressed.

She tried to hide under the cars.

I sat down next to her, and she snuggled close, panting, and hiding her head.

It was time, I decided, to put her back in the house.

The Grown Son tried to take her, but she wouldn’t leave my side.

Ha – now he knows what it feels like to be ignored by the Best Dog Ever!

Blue was very happy to be back in the house and away from the chaos.

And for the rest of the evening, she ignored me in favor of the Grown Son.

But I’m not in the least bit upset by this.

I hope every dog I ever have ignores me in favor of the Grown Sons.

She keeps them coming back.

Good girl, Blue, good girl.

Liz Brenner

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Especially you.

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How To Make Your Story POP!

Shape your story

How To Make Your Story POP

Crafting Stories That Stick (and Make Your Readers Say “Wow!”)

Why do some stories capture your attention from the first sentence and stay with you long after you’ve finished reading? The secret lies in the shape of the story—its structure.

Whether you’re writing a fairy tale, a blog post, a novel, or a sales pitch, powerful storytelling follows a familiar path: setting, conflict, rising action, climax, and resolution. This story arc helps readers feel grounded, engaged, and satisfied.

To illustrate, let’s walk through these five classic elements using a timeless tale: The Three Little Pigs.

The Setting: Where The Story Begins

Every great story needs a sense of place. The setting introduces your reader to the world where the characters live and act. It can be real or imaginary—but it needs to feel vivid and specific.

In The Three Little Pigs, the setting is a quiet countryside where three pigs decide to build their own homes. The sunny, pastoral backdrop sets the stage for what feels like a safe, peaceful world. That is, until trouble arrives.

WRITING TIP: Your setting should do more than just describe a place. It should reflect tone, mood, and theme. Whether your story unfolds in a city apartment, a medieval castle, or a cozy coffee shop, the setting grounds the reader in your world.

The Conflict: What Drives The Plot

No conflict? No story. Conflict is the central problem that challenges your characters and drives the plot forward.

In our piggy tale, conflict comes in the furry, ferocious form of the Big Bad Wolf, who is determined to blow the pigs’ homes down. The pigs must find a way to survive—and outsmart—their unwelcome nemesis.

WRITING TIP: Conflict doesn’t always mean physical danger. It could be a relationship issue, an internal struggle, or a goal that feels just out of reach. Whatever it is, it should challenge your character and create stakes

The Rising Action: Building The Tension

Once conflict is introduced, the rising action kicks in. This is where the story escalates. The problems intensify, the stakes get higher, and the audience leans in.

In The Three Little Pigs, this is when the wolf blows down the straw house and then the stick house. Each house that collapses raises the tension and teaches the pigs—and the reader—a valuable lesson about preparation and perseverance.

WRITING TIP: Don’t rush this part! Rising action should stretch the tension and build curiosity. It’s the lead-up to your story’s biggest moment.

The Climax: The Turning Point

The climax is the peak of your story—the moment of greatest tension or emotional intensity.

In our example, this happens when the wolf tries to blow down the brick house…and fails. The pig who built wisely is safe, as are his brothers who found shelter in this house, and the wolf is defeated. It’s the payoff the reader has been waiting for.

WRITING TIP: Make sure your climax earns the buildup. It should directly result from your character’s choices or growth, not just a stroke of luck.

The Resolution: The Satisfying Wrap-Up

After the tension of the climax, every story needs a resolution. This is where the action winds down and the reader sees how things have changed.

In The Three Little Pigs, the pigs reflect on what they’ve learned. The wolf is defeated, the brick house stands strong, and the story ends with a clear message: hard work and smart choices pay off.

WRITING TIP: A good resolution doesn’t tie up every loose end—but it gives readers a sense of completion. Leave the audience with something to think about.

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The Bugs Love Me And My Bug Spray!

Bug spray

We’re still in early June, and I’ve already been eaten alive by bugs.

This past weekend I had to do some yard work.

I wore long pants tucked into socks.

With boots.

And long sleeves.

And a hat and a bandana and gloves.

And I used a toxic amount of bug spray.

I still got bitten.

Seriously?

Why do bugs like me so much?

I certainly don’t like them.

Can’t they sense my hostility and my unwelcoming nature?

If a toxic amount of bug spray isn’t enough, how much do I need to be using?

Which is worse – too many bug bites or too much bug spray?

Either way I’m doomed.

It’s going to be a very long and very itchy summer.

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How To Ruin Your Blackberry Harvest

Blackberry season

I have a row of blackberry vines in the back yard.

Over the years, I have learned that I have to keep them trimmed back.

One small bush can produce an enormous amount of berries.

If you can’t harvest the fruit fast enough, it attracts flies.

Enormous, man-eating horseflies.

That bite.

So, yeah, I’ve got to keep those vines trimmed back.

This year, however, after I harvested my first round of berries and made one batch of blackberry jelly, the birds got to the fruit.

They picked my entire crop clean!

On the first day they got all the ripe berries.

And after that, they took the rest.

Seriously?

When the Grown Son was small, he thought we should install a scareclown in our garden.

It could throw pies at the birds.

It’s an ingenious idea; however, there might be a secondary problem with all of that pie debris.

Instead, I have tied some shiny, bird-scaring ribbon to my vines.

Hopefully I can get a second crop this summer.

Stupid birds.

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Seriously? A New Breed of Giant Mutant Spiders?

Spiders? Eww.

Spiders?

Eww.

I’ll have to move out of my house.

I found, in our garden shed, a large pile of unidentified poop.

It’s not mice.

Mice scat is the size of uncooked grains of rice.

It’s not rats.

Rat scat is the size of cooked grains of rice.

I have no idea what the creature was, or, more importantly, how it got in the shed.

All I know is that it’s bigger than a rat.

Much, much bigger.

My whole family thinks this is hilarious.

The grown sons are each blaming each other.

Bob claims to have made a Bigfoot sighting.

They are all telling wild tales of a new breed of giant mutant spiders.

For the record, none of them are as funny as they think they are.

In fact, they’re not funny at all.

What if it IS a new breed of giant mutant spiders?

This situation calls for Cri Man Squa, F and C, double time.

If you’re an Office fan, you’ll understand.

Although now that I think about it, it could have been Packer.

Should I be worried?

What’s worse?

A new breed of giant mutant spiders?

Or a special delivery from the Packman?

Eww.

It doesn’t matter.

I’m moving out.

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Cliché? Or Truth? Or A Little Bit Of Both?

Cliche? Or truth? Or a little bit of both?

It’s cliché, but it’s true.

The more things change, the more they stay the same.

Artificial Intelligence seems to be taking over the world.

But AI has its limitations.

It’s just a tool, like spellcheck or grammar check, that absolutely needs human oversight.

I watched a video clip the other day that was obviously created by AI.

It kept pronouncing the word steady like steedy.

Yes, /ea/ can be a long /e/ sound sometimes.

Like in the word meat.

But not in the word steady.

A human would have caught that.

I saw another video clip about crochet.

It kept calling the crocheter the “cr**ch eater.”

Oops.

Whoever made that AI clip and slapped it onto their website without reviewing it should be very, very, very embarassed.

I read an article about a college professor who was so fed up with students using AI that he is now requiring all assignments to be handwritten, and all exams to be oral.

Just like in the old days!

The more things change, the more they stay the same.

It’s cliché, but it’s true.

Liz Brenner

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Even you.

Especially you.

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“That’s Hedley,” Is STILL A Great Line!

Hedley, it's Hedley!

I’ve met someone named Hadley.

All I can think about is Harvey Korman from Blazing Saddles.

The That’s Hedley line keeps running through my head.

The Hadley I’ve just met is young, so hopefully no one from this generation will get the Blazing Saddles reference, and no one will laugh.

Except me.

And only on the inside.

I don’t feel too bad about laughing because all my life I’ve been called names.

Kids used to sing the Lizzie Borden song at me all the time.

Also, for years, I heard non-stop, “Not now, I’m right in the middle of a Rothschild’s,” although today probably nobody remembers that jingle.

What I’ve always tried to do is to get everyone to recognize that I am actually the Queen of England, but for some reason that never caught on.

Everyone’s name has got a funny reference.

Once, when one of my boys was young, he got in trouble for cracking a joke about a teacher’s name.

Yes, it was rude, and yes, he deserved to be punished.

But it was also clever.

Over the years, I had heard all of the nicknames for this teacher, and my kid came up with a new one.

They could have given him a little credit for coming up with something unique.

He didn’t get credit.

He got in trouble.

Oh well.

He’s also one of the few young people who have seen, and appreciated, Blazing Saddles.

So there’s that.

That’s Hedley!

Liz Brenner

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An Ankle Monitor – The New Fashion Rage

An Ankle Monitor!

I got one of those under-the-desk bicycle pedal things.

I sit at my computer all day, so this will give me a little exercise.

A hard lesson learned is that it’s MUCH better to pedal backward than forward.

With forward pedaling, I tend to slide out of the chair.

Going backward keeps my rear end firmly planted in place.

I also learned that my office chair has a distracting squeak.

A shot of WD40 solved that problem.

I’m trying to keep track of my steps, so I’ve been wearing my Apple Watch on my leg.

It looks like an ankle monitor.

Which feels a bit like false advertising.

If I’m going to wear an ankle monitor, I should at least make an attempt to be a criminal.

However, I have no inclination toward drugs, burglary, or violence.

Also, I have absolutely no skills.

I would make a terrible criminal.

I’m going to ask the Grown Sons how I should approach this.

I bet they’ll have lots of great ideas for me.

Hahaha, seriously, the Apple Watch is the closest I’ll ever get to an ankle monitor.

Liz Brenner

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